Today I met joy, my friends and I went to the LIANHUA Mountain Park.
At first, we bought a big loaf of bread and we ate it on the lawn. The bread was delicious. Then we went hiking. On the way to the top of mountain, we saw a lot of trees and some beautiful flowers. They were colorful. I saw a sign. It says "Grass and flowers also have live, No picking!" Mary asked to me “Can you see that? Don’t pick flowers! ” “OK, I see.” We climbed the mountain for a long time, but we still didn’t get to the top. We were tired. Then John said: “Oh, no. I am very tired. I don’t want to climb this mountain. I don’t like it.”
Suddenly, I saw a lake. It was very beautiful. I said aloud, “Why don’t we go there? There is a lake!” Then we went to the lake. The lake was very clear.
We caught some tadpoles and a shrimp. Those tadpoles were very cute. I interviewed some people. First, I met a fat man. I asked him: “Good afternoon! Sir, what do you think of the LIANHUA Mountain Park?” The man smiled and said “I hope that the LIANHUA Mountain will become a dwarf. Then I will be happy.” “Thank you.” I said.
Then I interviewed a child. I asked her “Do you like LIANHUA Mountain?” “Yes, very much”, “Why?”, “Because I love flowers and I think climbing mountain can help us to keep fit.” She said.
At last, we went home. Today was very happy. This is my travel experience.
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